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PostSubject: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:01 pm

Ok I'm working on a new fanfic, it's going to be based in the future and I won't be talking much about the past anyway I'm trying to make a good character and need some help.

Here's what I have so far about the character and the world.

Six tailed Jinchuuriki
This ruthless ninja is rather tall and has a masculine build, He looks to be a brute but his bijuu has taught him well and he is a very skilled ninja. His round eyes are gold. He has straight, very short, ash-gray hair. He wears a Chunin vest under an Akatsuki robe. His preferred weapons are hatchets. The six tails is a super intelligent weasel demon with control of lightning and thunder.
Name: Roku
Nickname: the six tails
Age: 15
Height: 153.5 cm
Weight: 36.9 kg
Eyes: Golden-yellow
Hair: Short ash-gray, wind blown
Elements: Lightning, water
He wears a robe in the style of the Akatsuki, because it is expected of all Jinchuuriki after the destruction of seven of the nine Jinchuuriki. He is the second person to hold the six tails since the destruction of the hell statue. He was raised by the medic ninja that are abundant in the Sound village led by Kabuto Yakushi. He was known as Roku by the entire village because his parents abandoned him after the Otokage sealed the Bijuu inside of him after his birth. He has the power to summon calm rain clouds and violent storms using the power of the submissive Bijuu he holds within him. He is a talented ninja and is the dominate one in the host/demon relationship. He dislikes his village because they have never like him only his imposing build and height have kept his teammates at bay, and the Otokage is the only thing that kept the rest of the village from killing him. He has a
The sound village is not what is was under Orochimaru’s reign, most of the village is made of clones of ninja who died during the war started by Akatsuki’s actions, in which Akatsuki was destroyed. The curse mark beasts also make up a large part of Kabuto’s army, he has been known to raid other lesser ninja villages
Naruto Uzumaki became the leader of the Leaf village after its fifth Hokage died in battle.
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:03 pm

Sounds great.
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:12 pm

Any suggestions? Anything even a plot or enemies are good at this point.
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:14 pm

Clones can't exist after the original has died.
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:20 pm

I'm planning on having the jin defect from sound village losing him and the clones would destroy the village which means lulz for all involved.
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:22 pm

Maybe Naruto can come in some how. Kinda like the way Sora did in the fillers.
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:25 pm

I was thinking about having it start with the jin and his team traveling to Konoha to compete in the chunin exams, he would atract Naruto's attention immediately
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:28 pm

That could work. Then maybe you could have him start acting a bit like Gaara. That would be great.
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:30 pm

Sounds good so far
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:48 pm

Maybe if he was emotionally unstable, and Naruto was going through a process of convincing him to be good. Then the jin gets upset and nearly kills some fodder nin. Naruto then get's mildly pissed, and disqualifies the jin. The jin get's even angrier and tries to assassinate Naruto. Naruto then has an epic battle, and wonders if he should kill the jin, or leave him alone.

Naruto decides to let the jin go, but the jin goes away to train in the woods somewhere on the outskirts of Konoha. Unknown to everyone, one of the konoha ninjas that was participating in the exams fell in love with the jin, after he reaped her. (I know. Sick right?) So she abandons the village to go find the jin. They meet up up and....something happens.... >__>
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:56 pm

I would like the jin naruto fight but not the rape thats just a bit much.
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:00 pm

....I read a Sakura & Itachi fic on it, and it was.........interesting. >___>

Well, scratch the rape. She just loves the guy. You need to include romance to make it more....appealing.
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PostSubject: Re: A little help?   Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:02 pm

yes...appealing afro
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